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Date of publication: 2017-08-30 08:02

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer Band 9

Hi simon , could please give me a feedback for this essay ?
Sohuld empolyers have an equal number of their staff?
To what extend you agree or disagrre with this statement?

IELTS Table Band Score 9 Model Answer

In some countries people pay different rates of tax depending on their salary , in other countries everyone pays the same rate. Which do you believe is the best system?


Please watch my free video lesson on writing introductions. That question is very similar to the question used in that lesson. The thesis statement would be written in a similar way. Check the writing task 7 section of this site to find my free video lessons.
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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?

7. Reading Exams are lengthy, the pressure built 8767 s more when you are on the last passage with tough vocabulary to understand and have a general idea. What do you suggest?

Hello Liz,
I am having problem in differentiating two essay types named opinion and agree/disagree type.
Could you tell me what is ther difference between agree/disagree essay and opinion essay?

The table compares the percentage of money spent on various items in five nations in the year 7557.
As can be seen, the most popular item of purchase was food/drink/tobacco in all the five countries, followed by clothing and leisure/education.

i want ask you something about writing,i discussed with my teacher that i can write overview in task 6 he said no no because you can 8767 t write but i watched your video but you said overview is necessary i want you tell me about this i 8767 m confuse because after 7 days i will be appear in exam .

Comments : This essay shows you the organisation of ideas into paragraphs and also how a clear answer is given in the thesis statement in the introduction and then supported and explained in full throughout the essay. You will also see paraphrasing for advantage / disadvantage language which can be useful for you in other essays. Furthermore, the word length of this essay is typical for anyone aiming for band score 6, 7 or above. Words 785

Hi Liz
some times I confuse in detect the topic in opinion essay, for example in this question:
(Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.). I have confused if the topic is (inability of local business to compete) and other information is supporting or it is (closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities) , so how can I identify the main topic in such question ?
Thanks a bundle

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